But just remeber i'm your greatest fan

thas very cute and lovey-dovey

That was sweet and cute.
the emotion was there but i feel u could have expressed yourself more but i dont know
i would suggest structuring your stanzas such as make them all 4 lines each this helps the look of the poem and gives it a structure
the flow was a little off but it wasnt that bad
overall i give u a 4/5
great job