Comments : A new begginning

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    This poem is so beautiful 5/5 you have true potential

    xD Happy Thoughts xD
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    It's really hard to go through break ups. [I'm assuming that's what this poem is about]. It will get better though, I promise. Even though this poem didn't rhyme, it had a natural flow to it. I didn't pause while I was reading it at all, and that hard to do with a poem. It was really a great poem! You have a lot of talent!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce