The more I think about your simplistic touch
And the way your hair smells within the wind
The more I become lost in this crazy messed up world
Falling even more in love with you till I can't comprehend

I love this verse, great write, awesome read. 5/5

This is an amazing poem, one of the best I must say. Very nicely written and enjoyable to read! Have a great Easter!

Mind-boggling poem,.its so nice,5/5

Great poem! :)

1st stanza 4th line "hang" should be "hanging" because it sounds better. Other then that it is a great poem. The flow was nice and I liked the word choice. 5/5