This was a very beautifully written poem with a brilliant concept. It flowed nicely and the word usage was amazing. I only had one minor disagreement and it was with this line:

"No one else will view this self-evaluating monologue with revealing content"

^^ It's a very well-written and great line. The meaning to this metaphor is great as well. But I feel its a little... too much. Poetry is good and effective when using the right words, but its not all about word-play. It is a really good line but it stands out a lot more than the rest of the lines in this poem. It feels out of place a little.

Don't get me wrong. This poem was absolutely brilliant and deserves a 5/5... Great write.

Wow, that is a fantastic read, its great work, well done xx

Good job!..it has alot of emotion, and it makes it great!...keep it up!
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What I have to say is that you have talent. Your rhyme scheme was good, though the first few lines seemed a little off. I'm no expert poet, but I know for sure that you have your own style that portrays your emotions into our poem. I love this line:

"My reasons for this is like a quiet ghost town and I am the only resident
No one else will view this self-evaluating monologue with revealing content"

another note is the end--even though you repeated stuff, it fit with the music of it all.

(btw, you got a 5)

I just loved the title. It captured my attention and lured me in to read the poem which is what good title are supposed to do. :]

I loved how honest and from the heart this was. It was straightforward and basically baby you want the happy ending but I'm not slowing down. Wow I could just imagine being in the girls shoes because I am a dreamer also looking for my one and only but hey if the guy doesnt want to settle down, why waste my time. I loved how this was just a peep into your heart and you showed your emotions for everyone to see. I loved the last stanza because if was just like here you go take it or leave it. The last sentence was a perfect way to end this piece. I loved how honest this was and that you didnt want to lead this dreamer on.

Well done *5/5*
I'm glad I read it :]

... I'm speechless. The concept was mesmerizing... The flow was great...and the word usage blew me away. I couldn't believe how beautiful, yet dark this poem was. I absolutely love this poem. Amazing write! 5/5 and I would definitely vote higher if I could...

Dis is a good poem. U have very good poems keep writing I like it :)

This was a very well written piece of work. its very passionate. It was a very very good read. 5/5

You have remarkable talent. i llove your rhymes and the story they tell :)