:) It's a very good write, and I enjoyed reading it. Especially the end! "I think with my entitlement, I should." Very nice. :) And if this was based off of real events, I do wish you feel better. :) And thanks for the comment. :) 5/5

It's a really good write and it paints pictures in the reader's mind. Always a good treat:)

Great poem. alot of emotion and good flow. 5/5

I like it. ful of powerful emotions

Yup, sure does have a lot of emotion in it. U did absolutely great on it. ;-)