I love how you say "Life is like writing with a pencil" and then you say why and stuff. This is really cool and I totally agree with you.
Just one thing:

In the first line shouldn't it be,
"Life is like writing with a pencil"

Instead of:
"Life is like with a pencil"

It would just make more sense. Good job on this poem and Happy Easter!

Wow, its excellent, this is great, so so true, please write more xx

Wow this left me speechless its amazing