Comments : Moving On

  • 13 years ago

    by FallingPieces

    Really good :D

  • 13 years ago

    by talesha

    Wow! Great poem I like it. Keep it up 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Diana

    That's great Dennis! Somewhere most of us have been, but never had the words. When a poem evokes memories, bittersweet as they may be, it's beautiful writing!
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jaymee

    I love this poem. It reminds me of my first unconditional love. Only on his part it wasn't unconditional. And I just want to forget it =/

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow ... just wow! So sad and heartbreaking... We have all been there before, and the way you wrote it said it all.
    Keep writing great poems....

  • 13 years ago

    by Erika

    This is strong sweetheart! I love the change of style to the narrative, and it flows so effortlessly. You certainly have a way with the sad ones, makes me want to hug you again! Love Erika
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jackie

    This was a beautiful poem hun. I understand what you're saying, and it has to be hard. It's these experiences though that help you realize who you are and allow you to become stronger.

  • 13 years ago

    by jennifer

    This is so sad, but beautiful at the same time. Emotions many of us have experienced during our lives masterfully put into words. Great job! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by MissE

    The simple yet emotive phrases in the poem gave me "goose bumps". This poem is so personal to me and reading it just made me have a moment of realisation. WOW!

    Keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by BeMusEd

    I like it.. A very great poem.. The author really express his emotions thru this poems..Keep it up..

  • 13 years ago

    by Confessions

    It's so sad =[
    I loved how you described the scene
    I'm touched..keep writing :)