I would scratch the "coz" but other wise I liked it :) great message too !

Hey! this poem is true, destiny is true but i believe you can control your own destiny by the choices you make, no one is ever forced into a situation without there own choices. Great poem

Whiat a sweet message in this piece. I especially liked the ending!

Mmm... it was a nice poem!
i loved the idea, but it was a bit bumpy!
you should try rhyming some words, to get the flow going... i liked the stucture of the poem, it was well done...
keep it up

It seemed more like a speach than a poem and i know poems dont have to rhyme but i like to read my poems in a certain way yes i know im fussy

other than that its was pretty good ill give you 4 out of 5

Nice work and its simple way to show your feeling, you got talent keep write 5/5

This was a sweet poem with a brightening message. Sometimes we all just have to accept the fact that destiny will take its course, and we just have to let that happen, no matter where that will take us.

Nicely done. :]

Nice message love will come to you if you just simply wait. everone tells you to change coz but i like it, it shows your writing style -raindrops 5/5

A very beautiful write![[=
I can relate in so many ways. 5/5

Jeanette.

A very well written poem.

emotions were felt.

nice one keep writting.......