Really sweet...the spanish line has a great effect.........
***aLy***

Te amo con todo mi corazon

I love you with all of my heart....
A beautiful tribute to your beloved Daisy:)

Hi David,

So nice to see you posting again!
I am glad that your heart is singing again...

Love Ingrid

This is a really, really beautiful poem. 5/5

Kalee

I love this poem
it is so romantic

This poem is very unique. You combined two different languages in one poem. This came out in a good poem. The rhyming are fine in most places, and the flow seems to be alright. A nice piece 5/5

I love your poem.. It's been one of the best i've read today.... So your in love who's the lucky one to have by her side such a poet?:)

This is adorable...love it &&keep up the good work...

David a very beautiful poem of love.
Great job!
Take care Cindy

Really great poem...I think the spanish lines added the final touch..beautiful..its nice to see some of my latin roots on a poem...amo este poema...es lindo y simple....nice work...

Interesting. It has a seductive and sweet feeling to it. 5/5

This poem is breath-taking. I love the mixture of English and Spanish. I feel Spanish is a beautiful language, so that added more to an already beautiful poem.

5/5.