Beautiful and you could do better aly but the feeling inside you show and tears come out any more we cant stope it, i feel how you feel each time you think you need your love and he is not here, its hurt and make us crazy i hope they can see it as we can ,keep write 5/5

Oh i did it before but you know i realy enjoy reading again

Aww i like this

Good job!

Sometimes crying is all we can do no matter what we do it's always hard to stop the tears.

Good poem... very powerful just like your others ones... keep it up

4/5

Colby

I like it.
But are they gone (As in dead)Or just out of your life?

Good poem though.
5/5

Good writing.
i know how this feels all to well]
=] nice job

Thats good aly!

Cute poem i love it!!