Jesus christ jesse...where did this come from????

Reader can you hear it?
Can you hear her heart beat?
She found out your a cheater
Thats why she can't sleep

^ this made me catch my breath...reader can you hear it?

But did you know you killed her
Look deep into those eyes
Can you see the hanging rope
In the tears she cries

^ this is the best stanza, i believe, i have read. ever.

wow. just wow.

Omg, mr tomato, this is a miraculous finding. I can't believe you had it in you. omg. u could totally get this published. It has flowing rhyme and rhythm. Also, very nice moral. I applaude you.

Wow i liek this, the ending line is really good aswell xxx

Wow, a very true and touching poem. it happens everyday and u put it words that just r so amazing! 5/5
xoxo
~me~

Suspenseful and just amazing. this was such an interesting piece. great flow! the message in this poem is wonderful. i hate players! and this poem describes them so well and puts everything into perspective. any guy or GIRL who has ever played someone should read this. amazzingly written. honestly. best part....

"But did you know you killed her
Look deep into those eyes
Can you see the hanging rope
In the tears she cries"

^i could see that rope. i rly could. well done!

5/5!!!!!!!

Great story, the answer lies within.

Damn that was amazing...

DANG!
im speechless... that is amazing!

Reader can you hear it?
Can you hear her heart beat?
She found out your a cheater
Thats why she can't sleep

this is my favorite stanza cause this has happened to me and its true.. you cant sleep....

great job!

XxAshleyxX