Dont bs me and tell me ur happy right now

There's alot of pain in this....i know it too well....there is a heaven and it's not calling you now.......this is wonderful....but then again, all of your poems are.....but your the wonder of it all.....xoxo

Wow, thats great, well done xx

Aww <33 its such a great poem. but while i was reading it was happy moment at first but then later on it got sad . but its so wonderful

Wow........

pause...

holy.. god. a sunny day so beautiful and then how you changed the story to something dark... was beyond unbelievable to be honest.. that was quite a read SPLENDID lol great right.. that was really.. wow...

for loving the world
and loving the sea
i seek forgiveness
lord, please, forgive me

how happy she was and when death came her way how she remembered all her sins.. and how she became scared.. so true.. so real..