Comments : Mistakes of the Parents

  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    For if Mistake
    I am
    then mistakes
    I will make.

    Do you see this? Do you?
    This is why you are amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    There are already
    scars striping
    arms and legs.
    Not mistakes
    Escapes.

    That is my favorite stanza! I love how you kept repeating the word 'mistake' and then finally saying, they're not mistakes but escapes. That was just *boom* in your face!

    I love it! *favorites* and thanks for the amazing comment on mine! ^^ very much appreciated!

    Keep up the great work,
    Lizzy,
    xxxxx