It was a good poem but like you said right here
Eyes wander; Thoughts wander, though just along for the ride

my thought wandered as i read this.
It didn't get to exciting till near the end.
Put some more spark into it. Plus I couldn't really figure out the meaning of the poem i just got a part of it

Their was no specific meaning it was a situational/story poem that is meant to attract the sympathies/empathies of the reader. Everyone's has a night where they lied in bed, unable to sleep, and thought about life, lost love, memories, etc.

I liked it and all but i dont know it was kinda boring. not to be mean but it was. it needs more fire more passion. more heartache and love. it just needs more.... something. it need to hols the readers attention. and if you want there sympathies then you need to show more of how you loved her and how you are hurting now....

I do not think their is anyone that has been in romantic love that cannot relate to this very well written poem

Well when tired eyes rest they may forget for a little while, but tired eyes don't rest forever. I like the line about the tired eyes wanting more entertainment even though their struggling to stay open. Reminds me how stubborn I am at times haha Excellent job once again relatable on many topics 5/5