Aww sweetie, I'm sorry that happened. I can't say that I can relate, but I can only imagine the pain you must be going through. I agree with Ashleigh, I think you could use more descriptive words to make the reader get an even better understanding of how you feel. This poem was really amazing. I'm so proud that you mustered (spelling??) the courage and strength to write about this (and post it here). God bless you hunn. 5/5

Wow, another awesome write. it seems the last one i read tells the story, and this one expands on your feelings and emotions, in depth, the first and last stanza are short and simple yet hold so much depth meaning and love in themselves. great use of words. really sorry you had to go through this. take care x