I wanted to tell you that i liked this poem.
i can see the picture that your trying to send us viewers. i gave you a 5/5 because you did an excellent job on keeping my attention. you did a spectacular job on.

a job well done ^_^

Wow this is cool! It really reminds me of my writing when I first started! I love the imagery you present and they way in which you convey it!

I definately think you are good! I love dark poems and this one is particularly unique! Someone get the exorcist! lol! A great concept, I dont think Ive ever read anything like it.

It does remind me a bit of my poem "Rage" in the sense that it deals with inner demons! Have a read and let me know what u think!

Oh yeah and keep writing! Your good at it!!

Natalie M. Sarantos