Comments : A Storm

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great poem! I love this first part, very cool:

    "It's a sunny day
    Lights flash before your eyes
    You think it's a joke
    But it's really a disguise"

    Nicely written, please keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    I love the first part too, but i love the bit about simplicity even more! good poem