I fellt hat way too, this is a very good poem, its liek the endless night fight every night. well done for sharing and it will get better keep writing x

I feel the same way sometimes when I'm all alone in a dark room. this is a really good poem. 5/5

Very well written.i can really relate to this.5/5
**harlea

Very nicely written piece. it was simple, but had a lot to say. And the last stanza was my favorite. :] 5/5.

Touching. Insperational really.
I enjoyed reading this poem, truly I did. I can relate in a way. I love reading poems I can relate to.
5/5

Wow this poem is amazing...... i love your poems, keep writing, you are a great writer!

That Is A Wonderful Poem.
Excellent
Keep It Up.

Very well written. 5/5 :-)

Very well written. 5/5 :-)

You explain how I feel right now perfectly.
wonderful. honestly.
keep it up!

The nightmares I lived
Each and every one
I start to shake
And feel so numb
^^^
You have painted such a vivid picture of .... as darkness falls our thoughts turn to the past and the pains that seem to consume our mind seep in, bringing forth the nightmare we only wish we could waken from.

I don't know what to do
What to think, how to feel
Nothing in my life
Ever seems real
^^^
A very hard hitting stanza! As though lost in the turmoil, sucked down by the spiraling swirl of sadness.

I want to run away
Learn to run free
Can someone help me
Escape this insanity?
^^^
To run in search of happiness, hoping that someone will reach out their hand and guide. Screaming for help, begging for sanity.
Great ending stanza!

The title says all .... "Can someone help me"
the thing we crave ... someone to just reach out and pull us through. Make us feel we do "exist"

Well done
Luanne

So sad.... good job

I liked your poem it's really good...good job!!