Few mistakes thats all change "I seen" to "I've seen" and "he know What" to "he knows What" i like how you give out every detail. and you are not afraid to write it all. dont wish to be another though because you are you. no one else. its the way you were supposed to be. everything that happens to you has a reason behind it. really great pom!

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Beautiful! Nice how you write about your passion for writing.. =] "Hopes and dreams wont run cold and blue" < I loved that line! ^^
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Woowwwww. This was really, really good. I can easily see why it got you into the college you wanted, anyone would be able to appreciate such an amazing poem as this.
It was just so vivid, and it kept you hooked until the very last line. I think it could use some punctuation, but it is definitely gorgeous just the way it is.
I would give you higher than 5/5 but I can't.
~gabriella

Waw its realy beautiful,nicely flow and powerfull words:I've never been perfect nor do I wont to be
I only have faith in me
its true what you say and i give me hope
and never let our dreams go,its so sweet and i love it alot 5/5 well done

Very very detailed, an enjoyable piece! I do think you should make it into stanzas that are five or six lines so it would not be one long poem. I felt like you were so true in writing and this came deep from your heart. This was my favorite line:

"I can handle things people shouldn't handle
These people trying to blow my dreams out like a candle"

Very strong and powerful words throughout this whole poem, great job, keep it up!

Few grammatical errors and it didn't really flow well.. but other than that this piece is great. 4/5