First stanza, third line, you mean they are. :)
Third stanza first line, yourself is one word.
It was a very positive poem. Short yet sweet. You rhymed consistently and the title wasn't bad.
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Punctuation is inconsistent. Some areas you have end punctuation while other sentences lack end punctuation. Try to use different words. I prefer rhyming schemes with more complicated words. However, that is just me, the great thing about poetry is in the end it doesn't matter as long as you're happy. :)
4. It wasn't a bad poem. It was, overall, written correctly and was consistent in rhyming. I wish there was a little more zest to it but other than that, it wasn't bad.
11 years ago
by Im not broken anymore
Wow this is wow... Great great job this is your best in my opinion... Flowed perfectly.. Everything about it was great excellent job 5/5