Keep hushed dear reader, The dead are sleeping

Oh my gosh, 5/5, the title alone got me, it was great all the way through!

I really like it! 5/5 :^)

I luv ur choice of words and topic 2 represent such a beautiful meaning. a very wonderful poem.

~Don't ask me how I'm doing
I don't want to have to lie
Smiles what you should expect
Smiling is how we cry~

omg, perfect! i think every1 can realate 2 this line!
5/5
xoxo
~me

This made me wanna cry. i don't know why. i don't particularly care why. it's really dark and it's great.

Do you believe in ghost stories?
The ones that make you scream
Remember to close your eyes at night
Or you'll know what those stories mean

^ yes, thank you. everyone...close your eyes at night....it's easier...

Keep hushed, dear reader, and tell no lies
The truth needs time to rest
Truth kills you slowly doesn't it?
You don't deserve her, at your best

^ they don't deserve her...stinkin panda's too good for the whole world..."the truth kills you slowly doesn't it?" yes.

Don't ask me how I'm doing
I don't want to have to lie
Smiles what you should expect
Smiling is how we cry

^ lol. smiling is how you and i cry..isn't it...

wonderful job. obviously 5/5