This is so awesome, I just love it! This was my favorite part:

"Will they just entrust their desires on a star so bright?
Or will they make a move following their heart?"

This just was so great and well-thought out.
People may not follow their heart, but they may. I think it is a perfect poem and I love
every line of it. Good job!

Thanks! =] I made it because I realized that I was just entrusting my wishes on stars. But now, I know that I have to move so I can make my dreams come true. Teehee!

Its good, but i would suggest that you attempt different types of poems. they dont always have to rhyme:-)

5/5

-Syn