by Timothy
|
Not bad, but I must say, not your best. |
|
This was really great. The beginning kept me curious and the ending was really creative. Nicely done! |
|
Very nice |
by Natalie
|
This is a great little poem! Personifying the sea was a really effective idea. I particularly love the fact that you go daily to check her moods. Lovely! 5/5 from me! |
|
I love you. |
|
Well penned Ingrid, and the surprise at the end. |
by mossgirl19
|
You're in love with the sea. Same here. Nice write! |