I really enjoyed the emotion that i felt comming from this poem, the flow was good. The wording is a little off the wall, but hey its good :-) 5/5

-Syn

Very well done, it seems some one is in love

Waw its realy great and i enjoy alot,
i love the way you write it and the picture you paint for everyone read this poem,i realy love the start :Hello somebody who will never know my name,"
I am like the little bug on the gray window pane,
Shouting but still you do not hear my call,
Watching you with her, makes me feel so small.
5/5

Great Poem! You did a really good job with all your metaphors and the imagery of how the girl felt...You could tell she had deep feelings for the guy..

"Again and again I feel your touch brush by,
Never will this feeling stay with me, just want to die,
I am the lonely raisin in the perfect mix of chocolate chips,
You are the sensation of all sweet things upon my lips."

^ was my favorite line... flowed so well and the words you chose were very good =D good-job 5/5