Comments : The Girl I Used To Be

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww good work x

  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    I read this earlier when u first messaged me...and i thought it was great.....ur a good poet keep writin....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Very well done. I liked the sharp contrast between past and present selves, much like an internal yin-yang. It can be confusing growing up, the way one sees the world changes so drastically. For me it's been a good change but for too many it can be negative.

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    Wow i love this

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Brilliant poem:)

  • 16 years ago

    by justanotherdamagedscene

    This is amazing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by You Kill Me

    Thanks

  • 15 years ago

    by Mazie

    Amazing 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Nia Warfeld

    That is absolutely amazing, If you are referring to yourself about this I can totally relate, keep up the good work.

    xx3 -Nia

  • 15 years ago

    by Marie

    Ive read alot of these "mirror" poems and they get boring, but somehow you managed to pull it off!! Great job =]

  • 15 years ago

    by haileyy

    This is really good katelyn !
    i loved the first stanza. the girl in the mirror just always seems to fit.
    great job !!
    -haileyy

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    Love the flow of it... awesome job!! 5/5