Comments : Scene Missing (No Happy Ending)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Im speechless i have no clue wat to say this poem is so amazing words cant describe it

    oh btw your poems lately are so amazing i love em keep up the good work

  • 8 years ago

    by Randy East

    This poem had really good flow and I really liked it.
    I'm left wondering how it has a happy ending though. From what I gather this was writing during a time in your life when someone walked out on you right? 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love the descriptions in this piece, and the flow was so smooth while the words were written and placed so preciously. Your voice is clear and the style is wonderful. I absolutely love this piece.