Untitled [[ Passionate Kisses ]]

by Mandy   Apr 2, 2008


His warm breath lurked across my skin
As his lips brushed against my ear
Whispering I love you
Whil wiping away my every tear.

Held so still and gently
In arms so firm and strong
Stairing at his cold blue eyes
Knowing there's where I belong.

My face stayed blank, emotionless
As his hand slowly touched my cheek
Pushing back my tangled hair
Making me feel small and weak.

His eyes mesmorized me
As his thumb slid across my lips
Feeling his sweet, warm passion
On his fingertips.

Amazed by his innocence
As his hands cupped my face
It was as if the world stopped spinning
As time just stood in place.

The passion that overwhelmed me
Was like learning how to fly
Feeling lost and distant
As seconds kept passing by.

He slowly leaned into me
Kissing me softly on the nose
Then moving down toward my lips
An unfamiliar feeling arose.

Our lips stayed locked together
As our bodies became as one
I became his cloudless sky
As he became my sun

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i know the ending needs a little work
and i'm still trying to think of a title.
but if you could comment and rate
that would mean alot. thanks.

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  • 14 years ago

    by DoRk

    Great poem i can picture this happening u have some spelling mistakes though

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Aww that was really cutee :) good job, keep up the good work. i liked how easy it was for me to see everything while reading this poem. great emotion too, some parts could be worked on like the wording at the end but it was a great read. but still 5/5 from me