by Mandy Apr 2, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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His warm breath lurked across my skin |
by DoRk
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Great poem i can picture this happening u have some spelling mistakes though |
by Sara
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Aww that was really cutee :) good job, keep up the good work. i liked how easy it was for me to see everything while reading this poem. great emotion too, some parts could be worked on like the wording at the end but it was a great read. but still 5/5 from me |