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I can't see past your smile
I can't see past your eyes
I only see my problems
I only see my lies

I don't notice you hurting
I can't imagine you crying
I see your life as perfect
I see mine as dying"

Love those lines my man. Keep on writing. And I relate to those lines so very deeply so good job.

-Daniel

Great writting, i can understand where your coming from and love the way you've written it out. Great poem.

Marvellouz Jobz... Keepz Itz Upz...

Bestz Wishez... 007

I love all ur poems they r just so great

Wow, i love the wording and just in general a great poem..I feel like this sometimes..love it 5/5