Cool poem, here are some suggestions:

"Baby...How could you think i want you "to leave"
I really don't think you need the " " on to leave, it would just look better.

"No other...."
I think you could add more on here to make it flow better and not be such a short line. You could start out with no other and then add on.

"The one i want to spend {{FOREVER}} with..."
You really don't need the {} on forever, once again the poem would look better without it.

Otherwise, great poem, you could put a bit more emotion in it, but thats okay. Take care

It's a good poem.. i agree w/ "Singing in the Rain". but i give u 5/5. good job. keep it up.

much love,
mac.<3

Uhm, in the first line..
change the question from "how" to "why"
making it
"why would you think that i ever wanted you to leave?"
that's it, then it's perfect!
^__^

Wow...that's a nice poem. I really like it. i feel your emotion in it. good job 5/5

Perfection 5/5

I lik this poem i can relate to it