Equal as one

by miracle   Apr 3, 2008


Equal as one
Words spoken with out sound,
And yet sentences form between us that no one hears.
You can read my thoughts by the expressions on my face.
Are minds connecting through time and space.
When it came time to say I love I didn’t stutter.
Your words sink into my heart like your teeth do into my neck.
Minds like one as if we have been to gather for sceneries.
Two bodies one soul your love makes me hole.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Nice poem...I like the line

    Two bodies one soul your love makes me hole

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    You have alot of Potential in your writting...
    the way you wrote your poem! made the reader have images of what you were trying to say in the poem! it was well written...

    But, i have some advices for you...

    i found this word "to gather" i thought maybe you meant to write "Together"

    try to put more passion into the poem! and try to put feelings as well, so when the reader reads the poem! he/she would feel exactly what the writter is trying to prove.

    keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    You have alot of Potential in your writting...
    the way you wrote your poem! made the reader have images of what you were trying to say in the poem! it was well written...

    But, i have some advices for you...

    i found this word "to gather" i thought maybe you meant to write "Together"

    try to put more passion into the poem! and try to put feelings as well, so when the reader reads the poem! he/she would feel exactly what the writter is trying to prove.

    keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Really beautiful:)

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