WOW! oh my gosh!!!! TIFFY...HUN...I LOVE THIS POEM. *starts to cry a little*...this poem is so sad. Nobody should ever have to go through that. I was abused as a child and finally I couldn't take it anymore so I told my grandparents and they called the authorities and they came to the house and took me away, I now live with my aunt and uncle and it's been 10 years. Wow this poem deserves much more then a 5.!

Aww great job, thanks for sahring xxxxxxxxxxxx

Wow. This is so sad. I wish that I could help ppl that go through this everyday. This is really sad. I liked the story the the base of it all but I think that if u made it longer than it would sound better. Like who, what, when, where, and WHY. I think that u answered most of those except 4 the y. Y was the father hitting her, and y was she sitting waiting 4 him. Y was it this time she died? I mean those were the questions that were going through my head and I think that if u talked a little more about it than it would be better. But don't get me wrong cuz I still like it. It's a very good poem. =)