I like your poems because they are showing your heart in each line and they aren't long and drawn out to infinity like so many others I read. some of mine can fall into that catagory too I'm afraid. Sometimes it's hard to stop and just let the words stop. keep writing and we'll keep reading

Its good and verry true
~courtney~

Your poem definitely described the differences between love and lust. It was all oh so true, but I felt it was a little forced like you just put certain words in there just so it would rhyme. If you're feeling stressed about rhymes I suggest just writing free verse. It's much easier. I also think that instead of putting "&" you should write out "and" it just looks more neat and professional.

It was pretty good.

Keep writing!
Cayce