I loveddd it :]
it's cutee
good job<3
r/r/c

Very very good!
grreat flow
nice rhyming : )
the only thing i could ever even think of to give you as criticism would be just find more complex vocab to use
but i like how this one was worded : ) 5/5 <33

I liked this one A LOT. short but cute :)

This is very good!
some of the times i didnt get the flow, but it still worked out great!
great job!

XxAshleyxX