Moonlit Lake

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Apr 5, 2008


Warmth of your hand
Intertwined through my fingers
Waves beat too quickly
Wishing time lingers

Movements and heartbeats
Life-threateningly slow
Thoughts race with the moonlight
Reflect, blue eyes glow

Your hand in mine
Senses aware
The lake water breathes
Breathes out fresh air

If you can't tell
I'm painting a scene
You told me last night
To have a sweet dream

You took my hand
As I stepped around you
Dance called romance
Dance made for two

Tis the end of the poem
From this dream I must wake
Let go of your hand
Goodbye moonlit lake

Moonlight always tries to do unique things. We wanted to visually demonstrate how beautiful this area really is.
~ Rich Hohne

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, very peaceful sweet. great job! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I don't like the end..you shouldn't have had to wake up from that dream, jesse..

    Movements and heartbeats
    Life-threateningly slow
    Thoughts race with the moonlight
    Reflect, blue eyes glow

    ^ well...you already know what i would say. so don't even bother asking..lol.

    great job, jesse.
    about five minutes ago i tried to write a moonlit beach poem. too bad it sucked. lol. great job.

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