I Can't Hate You Anymore...

by Mackenzie   Apr 6, 2008


After all I have been through.
With you never caring.
I'm not trying to be rude,
But when it came to you I wasn't sharing.

I try to hate you for what you had done.
You shattered my heart into tiny pieces.
Anger arises at the thought of you,
My wild side it unleashes.

Boy.. were you sure blind.
For you I was head over heels.
I try and try to hate you.
Yet the truth reveals.

I can't get over you.
But this one thing is for sure.
Even though I once did...
I can't hate you anymore.

**i know it is short.. but it is the truth. [oh and remember suggestions and criticism is always appreciated. thanks.]**

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  • 16 years ago

    by HisBaby54

    Cute :) i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Dragon Slayer

    Amazing poem! ((5))

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily

    I Really Liked It , It Being Short Really Worked ! 5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelso

    Just cause its short doesnt mean it isnt good.
    i liked it 5/5.
    and i know what you mean you try so hard to hate someone but yet you cant get them off your mind.
    -Kelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Who cares if its short?! its still cute : ) a poem could be 4 lines but be amazing its just how you word it and you did a great job : ) 5/5 <33