Dang this is horrible. Great poem lol
-vino

This makes me want to cry. But it's something that happens all to often. 5/5

Wow...............im am in tears...but this is great!!!!!!!!!!! omg i love it!! its gloomey and very awesome. :) beautiful! even though she dies...idk theres something about death that comforts me.....when i read she died...i didnt tear up because she cried...i teared up because she's free now......beautiful story

It did make me cry which means it is very powerful. i loved reading it - it gripped me, shocked me and upset me at the same time. i think wow that is amazing.
you are amazing

Was this actually real?
if it is.. its messed up... i wouldnt be living with a life like that..