So sad. I can feel the anger and hatred you expressed in this poem. I honestly can't say I can relate to this.. but I bet others can. 4/5 from me.

I understand u might hate ur mom but this is a strong poem and wow a little more sense of life and meaningful words might help it....

Damn...i can definitely feel the intensity of the hatred and anger in this poem...but you cant let that shxt take you over. by writing this poem you've made a pretty strong statement that your gonna let something that shouldnt even take you under haunt you for the rest of your life.....but this poem was strong...very intense and emotional. great job

Amazingly powerful and emotional. i think you should consider writing for the whole of your life