Good job...i liked it.....

Do u know how great of a writer u are
you should get your stuff published

This is wonderful kyle...you should really get your poems published, you are amazing...you add like vivid imagies into my mind, i feel like i am reading a story. This one had so much emotion, it just got my attention...I love it though...!!

I enjoyed every second. Kept my intense eyes onto the screen

<3

CourtneyxHolland
I<3U

Wow Kyle.. Very good poem.. Sad how it's fitting though. Again.