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  • 16 years ago

    by ShawdowDancer

    I like it i always like rhyming poems cool one

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Not at all stupid................... Its amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by EmOToMbOy13

    It really good., I like that rhyming poems.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jes Miller

    Short yes, stupid no...if you don't like the way you wrote it, keep at it, and write it until you like the way it is...

  • 15 years ago

    by shadowknight

    Its something i can really relate to !!!

    Great job
    Love the last line!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is great, I really like it, its short but who cares? You did a nice job here, and I liked your rhyming scheme. Take care! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by XxNeverlettinyougoxX

    I actually think this is a great poem
    exspecially for something you wrote at 3 am!
    5/5