Nice jealousy poem, envy, bitterness and a twist of anger with a couple of snide remarks. Love it! I especially like the end:

" Kill me slowly or kill me fast,
Just let him go, finally, at last."

It's really effective. 5/5

Em xXx

Very passionate . I love the mataphors

Beautifully written...

"Come and get me, I challenge you.
Set him free and change your direction,
He can beat you through and through,
But you would steal all of his affection."

^^I could the desperation behind these lines...
Wonderful metaphors used...
The last lines adds more effect to the poem..

overall a nice write..

Like your poem, a nice pixogog scheme you got too, flows well and the emotions are well expressed. Nice poem, greatly penned piece. Keep up

Andrew

Sorry made a spelling mistake, i meant rhyming scheme ok. Good work

This poem is really good i love it

This is a great poem, I was already drawned to it when I read the title.... I really enjoyed it keep up the good work

Netta B