I Thought it was a sad poem at first, and i liked it very much...But i think it slow down when you mentioned "we share"...I dunno.. first few lines were emphasizing of wishing ( i thought to be wit someone but you already got one)...

Anyways That fantasy of yours to some is jus a normal thing shared by two genuine hearts..

Nice poem and nice dream for all young lovers... may all your loves come true. peace