Comments : Am I making sense?

  • 16 years ago

    by Freedom

    Its sad poem,i can read sadness through ur lines.but anyway i enjoyed it :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    That was amazing. I can't describe it. I felt music in my heart while reading this, it makes a lot of sense to me. :) Great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    All the words upside down and thinking how sad can be without blaming one of the others and you really pure the words amazing. u did absolutely good on this!