Comments : I Can't Believe it?

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    You will find the one who will replace it..... Marvellous Job

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this..great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Great poem, well done
    your a good writer 5/5

    Sarah xx

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    O this is so sad, but a wonderful poem, i love your poems keep it up.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Texastar

    One little suggestion if I may- I didn't thought you'll do that,
    the only thing I could do is,
    ~~~change thought to think that way it cn rhyme with thing and thn change you'll to you'd~~~~

    I didn't think you'd that,
    the only thing I could do is,
    ~~~~

    but great, great poem!!!! Keep up the good work Steven. Also loved the way you wrote it, different but wel written.