Wow.. this is truely beautiful.. i love it so much.. 5/5

Sweetened shadows in your eyes,
Chilling hearts, it's no surprise,
Tears cascade down my cheeks.

I liked that stanza alot. You started this piece nicely and held alot of great metaphors throughout the piece. This is a beautiful and touching poem which had a nice flow and excellent description. The was you placed the words came together nicely to form a touching and emotional love poem which I have had the pleasure of reading. Look forward to reading a few more of your poems in the near future. Well done. ~Mel

Very romantic poem.... the used of word was excellent.. a nice piece of work you have put here.... great job...

Broken rainbows in the sky,
You speak my name; my heart flies,
But will you ever know?

this stanza is my favourite stanza
you have got 5