This is a really great poem!
i agree with "Rikki" on the "dorky laugh" stanza...
that would only perfect this already miraculous poem!
<3
XxAshleyxX

Good poem...lots of feeling

Wow amazing. it could be more powerful maybe but i still love it
like all ur poems

Beautiful poem, truly is not easy forget about the ones you, well done. KEEP IT THE GREAT WORK.

Beautiful poem, truly is not easy forget about the ones you, well done. KEEP IT THE GREAT WORK.

Beautiful poem, truly is not easy forget about the ones you, well done. KEEP IT THE GREAT WORK.