I felt this piece was okay, but that there was nothing really special about it. Though the rhymes semi-flowed and worked, none of them were really great. They were all pretty plain and average, sorry. The story was okay. It was a little more unique that the actual writing. My favorrite bit was the first two lines of the last stanza - because of the rhyme, and the way the second line was put.

Brad

Bravo ,
i like this one , for me , rhyme and words, not really important for a peot , as long he make the feelings known to the reader , and i felt it much , inside , encourage yuo , to have more and wiote more , i am looking forward to read from you again

I like it, beautiful poem. Mm..

Niceee ^^

Wow..... I mean wow is ther another way to describe it

I really liked your poem i've added this to my favorites!

I think the rhymes flowed a bit. But it sounds like you've been trying to force the rhyme a little. If you didn't force the rhymes, this poem would be a lot better.

But, keep on working! You might find a strategy to rhyme the words, yet make it flow easily and naturally.

Keep on writing!

I thought it was cool. i liked it. and its so true some people do pretend that the friendship you had with them never happened. but I'm giving u a 4/5 bcuz i don't get what u said when in the first stanza "Just because I want to be friends with me" are you talking about your self or someone else.

I really like this poem it's sad though
My favorite lines are

"I thought you were different from the rest
I thought you would be the best"

I felt that way about my "ex" best friend
She said she was just using me to get to some boy
Not very cool...
I also LOVE the last stanza it's great
Great poem all together<3