Comments : The Night He Took Her Away...

  • 16 years ago

    by meliLOVE

    Aww. omg that poem was so sad but i know wat you mean. i went through something a lil like that and it took me years before i stoped being scared to even be at home alone. even tell this day i still get scared sometimes but its getting easier and easier everyday and i hope you get better to..

  • 16 years ago

    by Fyri

    Wow. it is really good. keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Texastar

    That was a facinating poem. pretty good. One thing did turn me down,off tho wz that you wer preg wen u wernt married. Im agianst tht tho many rnt. jst my opinion.
    bt it wz stil a good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica V Loves U

    Oh my god this was such an amazing poem. It really touched my heart and it grabbed my attention right away. Great job for real!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Toni Ann

    That is so sad!! I hope that your bf is there to protect you!! You don't need to be married to have a baby you need to have a healthy relationship with the man you love!! i hope that your life gets better. I would be just in the same pain as you....why would someone do that to a pregnant woman??? Why would they do that to any woman?? Any person?? i have been raped but it was not anything like that!!! I am here for you if you ever need to talk!! Even if you don't know me!! But then you can talk freely cuz then i don't know you either!! Hope to hear from you!!!