Your pitty self

by Hollywood   Apr 11, 2008


My love is not the same
My heart at the floor,
I see your feet they..as they stomp on the floor!

I see the way you look at me;
It is not the same as it did,
Your eyes never stung at the back of my neck,
Your hands never hurt me,
But that was then!

Love is so stupid
Just like you,
I cannot believe i fell for someone like you,
You took and took untill there was nothing left,
I put my heart on the floor,
And there you were...
Again taking and taking....
WHATS WRONG WITH YOU??

DO YOU NOT CARE WHAT YOUR PUTTING ME THROUGH?

Love is not this
Love is not being beaten and left bleeding on the floor!
I hate you and your pitty self...
I hate you and your little pitty self!!!!!1

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    Yes this is fantastic. i know how you feel so much. you put so much emotion into all your poems and i love that
    it's like everything you write about happens to you
    that is amazing
    you seriously are a great writer
    please keep it up
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by AndreaDanielle

    I love this poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    Stong lol 5

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I can really relate to this poem. About a month ago I decided to run away.(I know I'm eighteen and it isn't considered running away) And I hurt alot of people that cared for me and loved me. I even made my Father cry. This poem is kind of what I should have read befor I left, butr now I am back.
    Your friend AJ

  • 16 years ago

    by Nathanilliam

    I like it. i've never tried to get into a relationship, but i know people that have experienced this. not a fun time. good poem, I could really feel your struggle and pain.

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