Hey..
i really enjoyed and would like to read more from u... A poem full of beauty and emotion its something that i can relate to very well

Hannah x x

I really enjoyed it, it has a great meaning it had so much emotion and is something alot of people can realte to. I think you did a very wonderful job!

Excellent job. Wonderful descriptions! I would love to read more! Thanks for sharing

Thank you for commenting on my poem! <3

I really liked this one. It was beautifully written, and had a very soft tone to it...5/5

This poem reflects the ecstasy of being in love as only a few poets could

"The light is shining and my strength shrinks away
however these bright soft feelings tells me its okay
It seems that my morals and thoughts lay with my heart
on a comfy pillow that was once torn apart."

i love all of it but the above part has to be my fave stanza, i just love the descriptivness of the words you have chosen and the openness of the feelings.

i really like this one!!

well done

xoxo

Wow that is amazing! It has so much emotion!
Great Job! 5/5

That was a really amazing read, my friend. The only thing I have to comment on is your spelling and punctuation. Just look back over it and fix those few mistakes and you'll have the best love poem ever! :)

Wow... i feel this is one of the best poems i ve ever cme across!!! beautiful!