Comments : Final Breath

  • 16 years ago

    by Amy

    WOW! That was very deep. I wasn't sure where it was going at first, but I really liked the way it ended. Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Frank the Great

    Great job in this poem. i really liked it. very deep torwards the end. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a very emotional poem. it really touched me. it was lovelyy. very expressive, and detailed. absolutely beautiful in every way. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    Dude like wow that poem is amazing :D 5/5